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  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: There's a narcissist in the mirror

    Hey there! Ok wow! What can i say this piece of work is just amazing. The imagination is just flawless and it gripped me to my seat from the very ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: Exam Result

    Hey there! With the characters name and all this is definitely set in India! and Bro with all the stress with exams here not only from peers but also family ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Identites

    Hey there! Ok so my review is going to be kind of mixed with both positives and negatives. Positives: 1) I really liked your ending. Very suspenseful and it keeps ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: *deleted*

    hey there, Let me just say: This was great. i don't really mind the romance part coming later on since you've already got this atmoshpere built up. Well i have ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Religious Duty

    well, like they said above, this dealing with religion could be offensisve to some. but apart from that, the story was heartfelt and overall a good read. and guess what! ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: How to be Awkward

    The only thing i got to say is , get ready for this: HILLARIOUS!!!! I swear i laughed from the beggining till the end!! This i gurantee you is simply ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That Summer

    hey there !! ok so frankly to say, i liked the poem but as the others said, it lacked completeness(if there's such a word??). it felt like you left out ...

    Jun 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I'll be there

    hey there!! i actually liked this poem very much. it was what it should be: short and sweet!! it was nicely in ryme and even though it didn't have actually ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Poets are

    hey!! well straight off with what i think. well i think thst your poem was okay, it was not too good and definitely not bad. well, somewhere in the middle. ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Imagine

    hey there!! so this is my first time to review on a non-fiction but well here it goes. okay, imagination. that is like my favourite wordd. i could very well ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Azaleas for Susie

    hey there!! first off i'm going to say that this was a very beautiful story. gosh, i can remember feeling that way when my little brother was born and i ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Encyclopedia Britannica

    Hey there! well here's the review: -The first thing i would like to say is that your title is a very intresting one and i too am not sure how ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Foolish love

    Hey there!! This is really great. I really loved the way you wrote it, it felt like i could imagine this dark knight and the girl an everything..... you should ...

    May 22, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: See Me

    wow! this would definitely be a wonderful duet. (sighs) i can imagine it already. great job, i really loved it. now the next thing ofcoure, write up a few verses, ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: You Were Never There

    hey there, nice lyrics! the thing which i seemed to notice was that the song is not written out properly. you need to show where the stanza's are, the chorous ...

    Apr 17, 2010


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