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Re: There's a narcissist in the mirror
Hey there! Ok wow! What can i say this piece of work is just amazing. The imagination is just flawless and it gripped me to my seat from the very ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: Exam Result
Hey there! With the characters name and all this is definitely set in India! and Bro with all the stress with exams here not only from peers but also family ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: Identites
Hey there! Ok so my review is going to be kind of mixed with both positives and negatives. Positives: 1) I really liked your ending. Very suspenseful and it keeps ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: *deleted*
hey there, Let me just say: This was great. i don't really mind the romance part coming later on since you've already got this atmoshpere built up. Well i have ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Religious Duty
well, like they said above, this dealing with religion could be offensisve to some. but apart from that, the story was heartfelt and overall a good read. and guess what! ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: How to be Awkward
The only thing i got to say is , get ready for this: HILLARIOUS!!!! I swear i laughed from the beggining till the end!! This i gurantee you is simply ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: That Summer
hey there !! ok so frankly to say, i liked the poem but as the others said, it lacked completeness(if there's such a word??). it felt like you left out ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: I'll be there
hey there!! i actually liked this poem very much. it was what it should be: short and sweet!! it was nicely in ryme and even though it didn't have actually ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Poets are
hey!! well straight off with what i think. well i think thst your poem was okay, it was not too good and definitely not bad. well, somewhere in the middle. ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Imagine
hey there!! so this is my first time to review on a non-fiction but well here it goes. okay, imagination. that is like my favourite wordd. i could very well ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Azaleas for Susie
hey there!! first off i'm going to say that this was a very beautiful story. gosh, i can remember feeling that way when my little brother was born and i ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Encyclopedia Britannica
Hey there! well here's the review: -The first thing i would like to say is that your title is a very intresting one and i too am not sure how ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Foolish love
Hey there!! This is really great. I really loved the way you wrote it, it felt like i could imagine this dark knight and the girl an everything..... you should ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: See Me
wow! this would definitely be a wonderful duet. (sighs) i can imagine it already. great job, i really loved it. now the next thing ofcoure, write up a few verses, ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: You Were Never There
hey there, nice lyrics! the thing which i seemed to notice was that the song is not written out properly. you need to show where the stanza's are, the chorous ...
Apr 17, 2010
